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O-Tiz page 5 by LaughtonMcCry

i actually made sure before the crit to make sure this wasnt a early Moebius comic i didnt know of.

im not sure just how sequential it is, but thats not really the point i think, it looks great, i really like the frame outlines, the only thing i can think of that might be able to improve is the hatching, hatches and cross hatches dont have to be square, they look better if they go with the shape of the object there shading. if you look at moebiuses arzach or really any comic youll see he almost never makes straight lines(except horizons at times)
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LaughtonMcCry Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student General Artist
thank you for taking the time to critique ^^
this is a very usefull tip that i will have in mind in my next drawings. thank you very much.
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